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Aug 2016

I personally prefer the black and white version. I find the coloured version to be rather bright and distracting with the extreme saturated red cyan and blue.

Although I do find the black and white version lacks detail in the background which makes it feel a litter empty, especially in the last panel.

A good job on the standard tree, but that isn't practical on a time crunch. Please continue to practice that tree as always, but also try drawing a group of trees together in a more abstract way, that way you're not spending 10 hours on backgrounds and only have time for one hour of character drawings.

It's a good start, tho it seems a bit too geometric, which makes it look like a mushroom cloud. Maybe have some branches and some roots.

What's at the base?

Shatterjure, depends on your characters I suppose. In my opinion characters will always take the focus away from the background. Looks good enough to me.

Here's a page from my webcomic: Planet Thundersnow
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Trying to generate interest, but it's just not happening. I think I should have uploaded a page a day instead of all at once. Perhaps I'll re-upload the pages as I color them.

Anyway, let me know what you think!

So, just want an opinion on my art. I have art that i made earlier, and art made more recently.

8 days later

Heyo! I'm new here and eager to start doing stuff. I saw this topic earlier and thought it was a perfect chance to ask people what they think of this current style

This took me an hour or so, I'm still learning/nervous >.<

One other thing, just in case someone is confused; Those red things are NOT blood drops or scars or cuts, its a rash stuck_out_tongue
Just thought I'd clear that up sweat_smile

Anyway I'm really happy and excited to finally be here. I'm looking forward to any helpful hints people may give me smile

9 days later

Ok, well, one piece of advice i could give you, is move the head a bit forward, because now the neck is kind of coming from the chin, even tho its a side view.
And another piece of advice would be this: At least TRY to shade a bit, it will add so much more depth to the drawing.
I guess that's all.

I'm using Medibangpaint pro, which is also free. I looove it as it has cloud storage and autosave among other things smiley And thanks for the advice!

Could I perhaps get some technical advice? I'm unsure about my font, its size, and the coloured borders of the speech bubbles. 😣
I'm still working on the art style, but I think I'm experienced enough to be able to experiment myself (over 12 years). c:

https://tapastic.com/episode/4319215

I'm working on the series banner for an upcoming comic of mine; could someone please tell me if it is legible?
Thanks!

Your logo is a bit difficult for me to read. Overgrower?
I like the idea and the colours of the leaves and flowers are looking great. You've put in some fantastic little details in the branches and twigs and it's looking super cute. smile Unfortunately, logos will often be shrunk down to fit business cards or link banners and these details can either disappear or become clutter. frowning
One option for you could be to use pre-existing font as a guide. This will keep your design level and the letters even in size so you can focus on arranging the plants in creative ways while the font acts as a sketch underneath. Then you can delete the font afterwards to reveal your clearer design. (Make sure to not follow the font like a cookie-cutter of course.)
Or, if you prefer to keep it more organic (pun intended), just keep the plants closer to each letter. When the leaves and flowers get too close to one another, my eyes get confused. (Especially around the OW. The leaves make me think it's an AW... and I'm not certain it's an ER I'm seeing at the end.)
Overall, it looks very cute and I'm liking the sweet and gentle atmosphere of your logo so far. Hopefully that helps! blush