airith

Airith

Cave Creek airith.com

Author of Airith Saga. Tech nerd and marketing super villian.

i like the art style, really well done and fitting to a sci-fi story,i just have a problem with the dialogue, it's weird and out of place, for example, they are talking about a tv show where the woman acted (is she an actress?) and talking about the shoes she had wear doing that ... in the middle of…

I love sci-fi and highlight it especially among all genres. Also I really respect people, who can combine art with work. So I have been very interested in reading your work from the beginning. I've already said in another topic, devoted to this comics, that I liked the prologue. Now let me specify…

Maybe this link will work https://tapas.io/episode/1322497 When I first saw the art style I thought, "Ok cool, this is going to be a dramatic sci-fi story". Then the characters started talking and it took an unexpected, but totally awesome turn. Your characters have such personalities and the dial…

I like the prologue definitely. :+1: The one thing which seems a bit strange to me is guy's facial expression on the first picture

I don’t know about you, but my sketches are so ridiculous compared to the finished product. Share yours too! (Even if they’re not silly looking it’s fun to see how they’ve developed.) [image] [image]

I think they are too similar to really make a difference. 1 & 2 look like variations so maybe he wears one set in one book and the other set in a later issue. No need to have your character ONLY have one suit (or way of wearing it). 3 looks like what's underneath the white breastplate and possibly b…

I like #2, because even though he's bigger there's more detail

I agree with @joannekwan. The intensity of the torso in no.2 takes too much away from the face (which is supposed to be the highlight of a character). No. 3 is pretty nice too, since the first thing you see is his face, but I think it looks a little too...assassin-esque? Unless that's the look you…

I'm drawn to 1 in particular. Good balance of light/dark, and I like the asymmetry the swath of the cape creates.

Holly sh*t! That's amazing, reminds me of Silent Hill a lot, I recommend you to see it's designs for inspiration :slight_smile:

[image][image] This was difficult to do, as my drawing proportions are kinda sh*t :smiley:. Originally, the monster would grab her face completly, but I think I will do that in another issue... [image] I like how the monster's weight is done, I wanted to exagerate it, making him like falling in slow m…

Hey everyone, First and foremost, I want to apologize to everyone that's been recently impacted by the recent influx of bot accounts that have been relentlessly spamming creator and reader walls on the desktop version of Tapas. This has been an ongoing battle, and while we've introduced a myri…

Looking really good, the creepy factor is top notch! I know is a comic but if you could make it feel like she moves like a puppet it will really add to her :smiley: I am also in the camp that it reminds me of GLados (and to an extend Mother from Chrono Trigger, just the concept cause in Chrono Trigger is …

No worries, best of luck with your comic!! :smile:

This is super cool. I loooooove how creepy she is. You did a very good job with this. Quality stuff.

You nailed the creepyness factor!. It is awesome! You can make her more unsettling by moving in ways the body shouldn`t move, like spinning the head or twisting the arms. Also some of the tar could spill from the body, like some of it spilling from the eyes.

Ewwwwwww. That is f*cking horrifying! Awesome! GREAT JOB! I love it! It reminds me. bit of GLADoS from Portal. Apparently her design was meant to resemble a woman being restrained and upside down.

oh i LOVE IT!!! shes super disjointed and freaky - like if someone combined no face with GLaDos does her f ace extend out from her body at will? it looks like it, thatd be AWESOME

I especially love how the cords and wires dangle the body from the ceiling. The way you also have the head extend from the body too is very unsettling and unique!

This design is horrifying and amazing at the same time! I love it!

Welcome back. We gladly anticipating your return to the world full of wonderful creations*~ :3 *tapas