Typing this to say your comic is a hidden gem! I totally binged the whole thing and before I knew it, I got to the end. The story was a breath of fresh air for me, I really adored how you're incorporating your culture as the basis of the power systems and as a huge fan of JJBA it gives me the same hype and energy that I get from reading it!
The art has obviously improved, but I think the biggest improvement was your staging (idk what the comic word for this is, but I'm talking about the flow of action and the pacing of the storyboards). It was a little hard to tell what the flow was supposed to be in the beginning but it's certainly improved now. I think my biggest nitpick for the art is that I think there needs to be a happy medium between the sketchiness of the corporea and the clean lines of the rest of the art. Due to the way the corporea are drawn, it doesn't feel finished because the rest of the art consists of hard lines and cell shading. This is completely a nitpick though and I wouldn't hate if you kept the sketchiness of the corporea!
The only other critique I have is that there are slight grammar issues throughout the story, so I'd just make sure that you double check the grammar or have a beta reader before you publish!
Keep up the great work, excited to see more!
