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Jul 2020

For a while now, I've been writing for my webcomic "Life's Lemonade"—a slice of life, comedy about a cartoon version of myself going through her daily life. I use this comic as a sandbox to work on my writing and drawing skills. With that said, I want to hear your thoughts about it. It can be about the art, the writing, the humor, the characters, the comic overall, etc. What do you like about it and what needs improvement? I want to know so that I can improve myself and maybe transfer this wisdom to my future projects.

Thank you very much. Your input will really mean a lot.

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Hi :smiley: I checked your comic and I really like it. You have a very personal style that is very recognizable, so I don't think it could be lost under other comic strips. I also like your humor. The only thing that may be improved is the font. the one you have is very thin and since it's pink, like the most of the comic, it kinda blends in. I had the same problem, so I decided to use a stronger font that is bolder and it's easier to see. I subbed and left some likes and will come back for more :slight_smile:

I hope that helped :,D

Can I also ask you for an opinion on my comic? I launched it a week ago and try to get feedback from people :slight_smile:

Hi! Thank you for your comments and your subscription :smiley:! The font I'm using for my comic is one I made from a template. You're right when you said that it's very thin. The one you saw was when it's in bold mode XD. I'm planning on fixing it sooner or later.

I checked out your comic, and it has promise. The prologue is short so there's not much to say about the story yet, though it did still provide a hook to make readers wonder what happened. The artwork has room for improvement. The land in the last panel looked a little flat. I like the night sky and the creature at the end. Your human characters look okay, though you may need to be careful with how you draw their bodies. The character's head and neck sometimes look bigger than the rest of his body in some angles. This seems to also be seen in the cover wherein the boy in the left appeared to have a wider neck compared to his body. With that said your work is clean and consistent. The character's emotions were clearly conveyed which is also great. I struggle with body proportions and backgrounds as well :sweat_01:. Overall, you seem to be heading to a good direction. Keep it up!

Well thank you, that means a lot and I hope you will like the story! I must agree with your points.These pages were done months ago and when I look at the prologue and the first pages of the first chapter, I notice there are some rough edges, mainly when it comes to characters. I actually expected that people will point it out :,D I got better on the next pages, but you are right, proportions and anatomy is still something I struggle with and have to work on. Thanks a lot for the tips :shook_01: