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May 2021

Hello! The concept of your novel is very interesting. This is my novel Daystar, which I updated yesterday:

hey there! I would love to hear your thoughts on my story!!

link: https://tapas.io/series/His-Traitor-Queen/info2

"Prisoner 381 will be condemned with capital punishment of death by hanging for high treason against the royal family of the kingdom of Eistas."

These words should terrify me, make me cry, and scream; but they don't. Instead, my head is in frenzy trying to figure out what that stupefying smell is and where is it coming from.

Is it what I think it is?

"No..no..," I murmur.

I can't die now, not before I find my...my...Suddenly the rag on my head is pulled off. The sunrays lick my skin as a noose is placed around my neck. It tightens as the stool supporting my weight is being slowly pushed to the side. But my eyes stare straight ahead.

Found you, I think sadly the platform right in front of me, on the throne with the royal crown on his head, sits,

My mate.


She was lost. A traitor. Bound by the demons of her memories. Or the lack of.

He was a king. Young and inexperienced. Shackled by the expectations of his people and the reality of an ill-fated prophecy.

They were the opposites. Both a forbidden fruit for each.

Was is it fate that brought them together or her weird tendency to attract handsome men at every turn?


Warning: this is not your typical werewolf story.

I don't think he will review wattpad novels that are not on Tapas. (He might though, I don't speak for him here)

Alright, just letting you know, and if you want my advice on effective self promotion then you should involve yourself with the community.

Posting things that isn't just self promotion. (I know that wasn't what you were doing in this thread, I am referring to other threads)

Anyways welcome to forums.

Hi there! if you don't mind, check out my novel too!
My writing style is different from most the majestic writer out there, but you can give it a try! :grin:

Hello! I would be honoured if you reviewed my sci-fi novel, Vehementia. It follows the story of Maggie Winters, a newly graduated counsellor in the futuristic city of Ardour as she deals with clients, humans who have succumbed to emotional trauma so strong it transforms them into monsters.

Oooooh, this is nice of you thank you for your trouble. If there is space left, I hope mine could be squeezed in somewhere. :smiley:

The Nightburn Prophet shattered life's future. His words sing through the echoes of time, reaching the ears of the last heirs of Jade Kingdom. Renouncing their crowns, the Duke and Princess risk blood and existence to cease the call for all things to end.

Hi there, i will happy if you check out my novel...
Here is my novel all about:

Title : Dead Birthday's
Category : Fantasy,Romance

Is the world change or me? A teenage boy named Mort Krueger has dreams that are either from the past or from his future, seeing a scene of someone precious, lost her life. On the same day, he had an accident one day before his birthday. This is where Mort met a high spirit of dead Manes, making him become first Holder, and from this the change, his daily life and the world he knew changed greatly.

https://tapas.io/episode/17205881

4 months later

Hi, my novel is at 62 subs so I don't know if that's lesser-known or not but ill put it here just in case.
Title: The blood wars
Category: Warefare, fantasy, sci-fi

2 months later

Hello! I would love to submit my novel for review.

https://tapas.io/series/A-Perfect-Family

"Hello, my name is Scarlett Park and I stay in Seoul with my parents and my brother. Anyone who meets our family always thinks that we are such a perfect family."

"A loving mother, father and brother who always supports me. What do I want from them more than this? A perfect family or so I thought until now!?"

Every person's smile in this room is creeping her out more and more.
Behind their happy faces lies a horrifying truth which Scarlett should not have seen.

Now, is she ready to take a leap in faith and continue to trust her perfect family or will she dig out their pasts and see what is behind their smiling faces.

Now, is the time she has to face the demons next to her.

"This family is nothing but monsters" she screams inside her head while having dinner with them and putting on that hoax smile to survive tonight.

"The knives are so beautiful with red color on them. Don't you think so Scarlett? her mother said to her.

"You should be a good girl" her father said with a griming smile on his face.

"Scarlett, you are the best gift I can ever have" her brother said in a sadistic tone.

"Every step I take, it is petrifying me more. How did I ended up in this family?"

Can she survive by turning blind eye to them or try to gamble with her life to find more about her PERFECT FAMILY.

I would love it if you could review my novel.

All right, I'll try to summarize my story:

So far, only the first part is near complete, and it involve a girl named Ava, an orphan living in a medieval city. She's one of many who can use Mana, a life energy that all living beings have inside of them to make themselves faster, stronger, and durable. One day, she discovers a plot to kill the royal family, and takes it upon herself to save them.

Act one will be completed on the 20th
The story is written as illustrated epic poem

When Death meets Chaos

Written as an Epic poem, "When Death Meets Chaos" is a love story between the Bringer of Chaos, Dalia, and Death himself.
"-Chaos is born, and what a disgrace for the human race."
Born this lifetime, as Dalia Queen Follow her, and the unfortunate creatures who stand in her way, as she marches another day closer to her 36th birthday, and consequently, the day of her ascension that will start the Death of humankind's greatest dream.

27 days later

Refreshing the topic, just in case

I'm not going to lie this scares me a little!
I have recently started to upload my novel and am really new to properly writing. I have asked for feedback before and it has really helped me make constructive changes. So even though the idea you will hate it scares me I can't pass up the opportunity.
Heres my novel:


I can only hope you will like it !
some things might not make sense about the character but certain aspects of the characters personality and his motivations will be explored in future chapters. :blush:

I just saw that this thread was started in August so I apologize if deadlines have closed or if you aren't doing this anymore!

1 month later

Hey yah! You seem to be inactive in The Stalker Watch these days. Maybe its because there are a lot of good reads that deserve good reviews. I like that and maintain that enthusiasm. So if you read this novel and hopefully review mine's along the way, thanks.