This review is based from the beginning to Chapter Two page 57.
Ahhhhh! You're melting my heart! Such a cute comic. 
I really like it so a lot of this is just nit-picking.
Storytelling:
You use correct grammar consistently (There may be a few minor errors that I haven't noticed, honestly I was so caught up in the story that I forgot to check) which when coupled with your gorgeous artwork makes the comic feel very professional.
I like how each character has their own speaking style and choice of language.
At times your storyline can seem slightly wooden. I think you should try to move away from the tried and true methods of story-telling and use things to make your comic original to you. Think of yourself and your everyday life and how you can use the unique aspects of yourself and your lifestyle to make your comic unique.
You have some well-balanced characters but I'm feeling like I need some more flaws in the main characters although since this is the start of the story these flaws may not be apparent until later on.
Art:
Character designs: beautiful
Backgrounds: beautiful
Expressions: beautiful
Screen toning: beautiful
I love your use of broken and decorative borders, they really bring your comic to life.
The only thing I can think of is that the father of the main character looked to young. Seriously that's the only thing.
Your Webcomic as a Whole:
Gorgeous artwork at a professional level, this is something I would pay good money for! Don't be afraid to try and experiment with your characters and story arcs, create something new and original to you. Own it girl!
93 points! And one of those little flower things you put in the frames! (points are irrelevant and completely unrelated to each other but I thought I'd put them here anyway)
