Thank you so much for your review! ( : as I said before, I understand that my comic is long, so that's okay~ and I'm happy you plan to read the whole of it later! I really hope you enjoy it c:
I'm glad you managed to get a general idea of the story basing on just prologue and chapter 4! To be honest, it's really surprising to me, but in a good way ( :
As for grammar errors- I'm doing my best to translate it to English correctly, but I no longer have a person to check it, so that Microsoft Word tip is really helpful! Didn't know it can correct these kind of mistakes ( : Will try to see if it works on my version of Word if I switch language to English ( : Thank you~
I think with Kestrel the problem is not her forehead, but eyes- they are really big, especially compared to other characters, and compared to her head cx Sometimes they make her look like a frog CX Still, I'm not sure if it'd be better to make her eyes smaller, or to keep her like this, because it makes her recognisable in the comic.
Again, thank you for the review! C: