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Sep 2022

Thanks so much for doing this! This has been my cover for about a year now, and some things I'm already aware of are the resolution isn't as great as I'd like, and the anatomy could use some work. The story is about a 30-something woman who is trying to run an independent grim reaper business (The Sapphire Bay Reaper Company) in a bad economy with limited funding. Meanwhile, her worst employee (gold hair) finds, and tries to help a lost girl (brown hair) who appears dead but insists otherwise.

Your art and compositions look cool! But your logo is lost in the mayhem :slight_smile: You could consider making it bigger, even if that means it will occupy the top forth of your page.

Cool design! I would make things a little more prominent like so.

Don't be afraid to take things a bit off the edges, most of the times you will get a much more dynamic outcome!

Keep up the good work!

I like the addition of the word The, but the word Paw is crushed under the paw! You could also try something like this

Cool artwork! I propose you bring you title up so it gets more prominent and rearrange your typography a bit. Something like this.

Keep up the good work!

Hey, let me return the complement for the super cool cover art! One think you could consider is making the typography more dynamic. This will amplify the impact of the whole thing, making it more dramatic :slight_smile: Something like this.

The power of composition of other elements is something that's overlooked not only in covers, but in framing as well. You can check it out in the Dimday Red comic I co-create. In it I work on the frame layout and the backgrounds. Let me know what you think!

Ah, excellent idea. I like the overlap, that does make it more dynamic and brings it together more. Thanks, seriously appreciate it!

Or if you have access to a program like Photoshop (or a free alternative) you could scan/take a photo of it, and move it around there :slight_smile: All the best in any case!

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Hey Senzu, sorry for the late reply, it;s been a while I checked this thread! I really like your cover, composition, typography and all! Good job! If I considered changing something, that would be the frame you have around it. It makes the title a little too crumbled and it doesn't let the rest of the artwork breath freely. And maybe consider making the Chapter 1 element less prominent.

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