Quick feedback for Covers by a graphic designer

[1SickPuppy]

Cool artwork! I propose you bring you title up so it gets more prominent and rearrange your typography a bit. Something like this.

Keep up the good work!

[candiedcotton]

Man, I've been watching this thread and the advice is spot on. Very professional.

I can't help but want to partake now, haha.

I would be honored if you'd hit me with your feedback.

[1SickPuppy]

Hey, let me return the complement for the super cool cover art! One think you could consider is making the typography more dynamic. This will amplify the impact of the whole thing, making it more dramatic Something like this.

The power of composition of other elements is something that's overlooked not only in covers, but in framing as well. You can check it out in the Dimday Red comic I co-create. In it I work on the frame layout and the backgrounds. Let me know what you think!

[candiedcotton]

Ah, excellent idea. I like the overlap, that does make it more dynamic and brings it together more. Thanks, seriously appreciate it!

[Manasa]

thank you so much i think i might need to redraw it then since its hand work not digital

[1SickPuppy]

Or if you have access to a program like Photoshop (or a free alternative) you could scan/take a photo of it, and move it around there All the best in any case!

[Manasa]

ok will try it definitely

[Senzu]

Hey I’ve been looking for something like this for a long time! Here’s the cover for Chapter 1 of my comic

Thanks in advance for your feedback!

[1SickPuppy]

Hey Senzu, sorry for the late reply, it;s been a while I checked this thread! I really like your cover, composition, typography and all! Good job! If I considered changing something, that would be the frame you have around it. It makes the title a little too crumbled and it doesn't let the rest of the artwork breath freely. And maybe consider making the Chapter 1 element less prominent.

[system]

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