Hello I'm new here at Tapastic . Hope you will guide me through things that I need to know ^_^
This is my Comic, hope you will enjoy reading it
I'm pretty mediocre art and comic wise, so I hope my review is somehow helpfull. As the others sayd, your art is amazing and the story got me catched ^^ The things with the boxes already got pointed out by others. So, my aditional thing to point out is: How often do you plan to upload? For art such as yours it's understandable if it takes longer but people don't want to wait long for new updates. Especially later, when you have more readers.
And here is my stupid litle comic. For a glance at the latest pages I would be thankfull. The first chapters look horrible, just as a warning!... Well at least I got some improvements.
I really liked your comic Tales of Lonia. It does remind my of the Souls series where the story has an air of mystery and its view of the world is very pessimistic. The more realistic art style and more muted colors fits the comic thematically.
Although your font of choice doesn't quite reflect the tone and mood of your comic, it looks to professional. You could use a font that invokes sadness as your main font. You should also use different fonts based on the mood of the character who is speaking. Also you could play around with the shapes of your speech bubbles based on the mood of the character like the font. You could also do the same thing with the frames. You can refer to the Dragon Ball Z manga for that.
Overall, this is a good comic that wears its inspiration on its sleeves and makes it their own. A few technically tweaks can bring out your comic's full potential.
Here's a link to my comic "My Hollow Heart" my first short story.
thank u for reviewing my webcomic <3
considering Kao, I really enjoyed the plot as much as the special characters in it. there are some mistakes when it comes to anatomy and composition but dont worry about it, the amazing progress u're having through the comic will soon erase those mistakes .
keep it up 
thank u for subscribing !! and for the the good feedback
really love the colors u put in ur comic as much as the unique artstyle and the composition <3 .
keep up mate , I really love it !!
thank u for submitting <3
so emotional with all the well drawn expressions .really wanna know more about the story .
keep it up pal
thank u for submitting and for reviewing my webcomic <3
I will try my best to post one episode every month cause of the few time I have for drawing .
about "The story of Osram" that's a good readable comic (not stupid at all)
I can see the progress through the chapters so no worries if there are some little struggles when it comes to composition and proportions .
as I said t's a Good comic
keep it up !!
thank u so much for the amazing review and for submitting ur webcomic <3
I really like the colors u're using on ur comic, the OCs and the songs too (they're making it more emotional)
tho u should work more on the backgrounds and it shall be perfect .
but still it's an amazing work, keep it up!!
I will be first to admit my backgrounds are something to be desired, but i will try to work on that for the future. I am a big stickler to color theory because it can help tell the reader about the character without you knowing about them, besides its kind of fun to pick the colors they are going to be wearing. As for the songs, I think music really enhances the mood you should try to listen to a song while reading your comic and see what happens.
I just read through your comic. The story is interesting enough, but I find that your panels are far too large. It takes a really long time to scroll though and there's less fluidity when reading because of it. I'd add more diversity in the size of your panels and if possible, less large gaps between them too.
@mugenotasu I reviewed your comic and left my review your comic's comment page.
@storytimebiondi I love your comic's style. The story is pretty interesting too, I'm looking forward to your upcoming pages.
Here's mine:
thank u for the cool review and for submitting ur comic <3
I like the plot of ur comic and the chosen colors for each character .
but I think u should work a little bit on ur anatomy .
love it
(Sorry for the late reply) Thanks for the review, I'll make the spaces between them smaller. But I still don't know what size to make my panels though.
@shaylafarley5 I have about 0.2 inches of space between panels.
@mugenotasu Thanks for the review. Yeah, anatomy is always a work in progress, but I can see a difference from the beginning to the last chapters, so it's getting better.
14 days later
Your art style is quite beautiful! The story seems very deep and it left off on such a good cliffhanger. I can't really find anything to critique except for a few errors with the text. Maybe you should have someone proof read for spelling or grammar mistakes? For some reason the music wasn't working for me either even though I saw the symbol for it... that might just be me though. I love it overall!
Mine is a dorky little comedy, It's my first ever attempt so it was meant to be a test run while I work on my art skills. Tell me what you think regardless. 
Naldo Comix Here's my webcomic! Please review mine thankss
