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Feb 2021

In the Adventure Time episode Storytelling Jake lists the things that a great story has to have. Does your story pass the Jake test?

It totally means nothing if it doesn't have these four things, this is just for fun. Go ahead and leave your links too.

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Here's mine:

  1. uh.... kind of?
  2. Absolutely not.
  3. Again, kinda sort of... from a certain angle... if you squint
  4. NO COMMENT!

well ok

  1. hmmm
  2. Uh heh nada on this one my friend :kissing_closed_eyes:
  3. A quarter no... don't even know if it could be a quarter but defiantly a Pennie :smirk:
  4. Well lets see if a happy ending will occur :joy: depending on how I feel

I have no idea what I said with number 3 but Ima leave it like that

  1. The statue comes to life. That's pretty exciting.
  2. Absolutely!!!
  3. Well... there is a ticking clock in the background all the while.
  4. You can't get me to give away my ending that easily!!!
  1. Yes
  2. There are lots of fluffy cute gooey lovey-dovey goodness with my main couple. :heart_01: .
  3. Totally!
  4. It's eventually have a happy ending.

1) Yup..by chapter 3
2)What?....um...
3)Yeeeees...right now
4) Well, I think its happy.

1)I guess....okay its slow
2)Well, slow burn as hell
3)Yes...later
4) Haahahahahhaha! what's that?

  1. Yes! It's a sci-fi/fantasy adventure.
  2. Yep, I'm a humungous sucker for romance. I'll be derailing this baby multiple times in that pursuit.
  3. This too! There are a lot of unanswered questions and one particular cliffhanger mystery...
  4. Yes... Though it's won't be entirely an ending.
  1. Oh well, I dunno, Jake my man, do you consider a lady throwing a car at a monster dude who's as big as a house excitement? You like rainbow ghosts? Explosions? Magical sword fights?
  2. Yes. There will definitely be!
  3. Sometimes!
  4. That's a tricky one to answer. It won't have a sad ending though.
  1. oh yeah 100%
  2. you bet
  3. tons of it
  4. haha no

Oh my! I love this idea, it's so funny to read some of the responses here. :joy: Now onto my turn-

  1. Well, yes but s l o w build up excitement.
  2. Does very slow burn romance and countless broken hearts count...?
  3. Y E S. Big yes Big future yes Big past yes
  4. Well, it depends really. Since Life always ends with Death... Does this count as happy ending-
  1. You could say it gets rather...thrilling
  2. Sometimes fast, sometimes slow, this MC gets around
  3. Did I mention it’s technically a thriller?
  4. ... :smirk:
  1. Oh yeah, it gets pretty intense sometimes
  2. Right off the bat, but fair warning, things get dark
  3. It’ll stress you out, your hair will turn grey, I make no apologies
  4. :wink:

I do pass the test. But I guess to find that out you would have to go read.

Muahahahaha

  1. I hope so...
  2. begrudgingly (started out as a parody of a romance novel, so it had to have SOME)
  3. fo sho
  4. Hahaha.... I did the best I could to have a happyish ending without being totally unrealistic given what's gonna happen... but if your idea of happy ending means the romance subplot ends in happily ever after, you might be disappointed...
  1. A group of adventurer's fighting monster. Very Exciting.
  2. Definitely. Mostly just fluff. But it will be the best fluff.
  3. Also yes.
  4. I feel like my viewpoint of a happy ending includes lots of potentially sad endings for others. So maybe??? We'll see :smiley:

Probably passes

1.There is a hot lady with wings and a sword. Very exciting. Also a fight scene. In case that wasn't gonna be exciting enough.
2. No romance here. I have failed you jake.
3. I would like to think I was able to create suspense in this one. So yes.
4. It's finished. So you can come and find out for yourself :wink:

Doesn't pass. But all's well here.

  1. Yes, all kinds. The good, the bad, the horrifying, and the raunchy (not too raunchy though :laughing:)
  2. Yeah. All the main characters have ships at some point! Some more than once
  3. Yep, and that's why I have an update for Friday and Saturday this week. Didn't want to leave people hanging on Friday's chapter :smirk:
  4. Kinda? :sweat_smile: It's more bittersweet, so yes'ish

AH FAK
Well I guess I failed 2/4 of the Jake test to an extent,
Excitement- What constitutes excitement? Hype moments, if so we def have that
Romance- Non existent, this is more of a familial story than one about such love. There's going to be love sideplots of course, but not front and center.
SUSPENSE- WE GOT THAT HERE AND WE GOT ALOT OF IT
Happy ending... I have an ending planned, might retcon it might not. Really dont thing I will. If anything it will be a bitter-sweet ending.
Thank u Jake very cool, god that show was always great

I was doing a re-watch and just thought... you know who would appreciate this arbitrary storytelling requirement checklist? Tapas Forums.

  1. Excitement: YES

  2. Romance: Teenage romance, but YES

  3. Suspense: YES

  4. Happy Ending: Not there yet, but you can make your guesses from the narrator dialogues (to a certain degree)

I like how everybody seems to avoid the ending question, or just answer with NO

I was prepared to be worried... but I think my Jake passes the Jake test :smirk:

  1. A little, yes.
  2. This is a large part of the story, honestly.
  3. A decent smidge of suspense for certain topics :upside_down:
  4. I’ll tell you when I figure that out :joy:

As for my short story, considering the stakes are life and death... :sweat_smile:

  1. Definitely!
  2. For a fun twist, yes :smirk:
  3. Absolutely! :tada:
  4. in my best River Song voice “Spoilers!” :blank:
  1. YES!
  2. Well... maybe... kind of?
  3. DOUBLE YES!
  4. No guarantees! :hushed:

I'm game, but I'll have to separate for my 3 current stories, plus the one that's due to release:

1: Does your story have Exciterment?

Finding Work - Yes! With swordfights!
The Shopkeeper - Things get very hectic towards the end, more fighting! So Yes!
Brooders - No fights in this one, but Garson is very excitable!
Lady Forista - Part 3 will have a LOT of excitement. That one won't be out for a while though.

2: Romance?

Finding Work - Not unless you count Arya calling Cheri hun.
The Shopkeeper - Arin just wants to go home, no romance for them
Brooders - Yes! This one has a very lighthearted romance (and a very lgbt-friendly one at that!)
Lady Forista - There's a lot of romantic subtext, and things are set up for me to explore a romance between the two characters. Forista's will likely be a slow-burn GL over the course of her adventures.

3: Suspense?

Honestly all of my stories have a healthy amount of suspense. Even ones that lack action have heavily suspenseful moments within them.

4: A happy ending

Finding Work - Yes
The Shopkeeper - Not... really? It's not a bad ending so much as he just sort of manages
Brooders - This ending got happy tears from @Gramkrackerhan so I'm going to say yes. (thanks Gram)
Forista - Yes, for the most part.

That was a lot but with so many short stories I had to include them all. The nice thing is any of these stories can be pick or choose, so feel free to check out the one that appeals most to you!

Hmm... Well!

  1. Yes! Lots of literal over-the-top battles and heated emotions.
  2. No comment.
  3. I try to give those sweet cliff hangers when they're needed lol!
  4. No comment!

: D


1.I guess?
2.Never, I'm the last person that should be writting romances. My aro self doesn't really get it.
3.Yes
4.No comment.

1: Yep!
2: Spoilers, sweetie.
3: I guess
4: Of course!

  1. I hope so...? It's not exactly action heavy lol
  2. Yes but it's not the main focus
  3. Yes :thinking:
  4. Hmmmmmmmm
  1. Yes
  2. Eventually. Kind of. It’s a long way off and will be more in the background...
  3. There’ll be some
  4. I don’t like writing tragedies.


1)yes
2)yes
3)yes
4) oh dear... humm depends on your perspective I guess...

When Death meets Chaos

1) Yes
2) Yes, but its gonna take a bit till i get there
3) well duh..
4) Yep yep, when I get there. Sorta

  1. you'd be surprised how intense a comic about regular degular humans on the 70s can be.
  2. that's an important plot point, yes. :3
  3. do you know how many fucked up things happen in my comic. i think edwin and pantucci's relationship is the most messed up slow burn, if you can even call it that.
  4. that's a spoiler! also, we haven't even rped that part yet.